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1、 原文：
Determination of Gallic Acid in Zhixueting Liquids by TLC Scanning
ZHOU Qun1, XU La-ying2 (1. Department of Pharmacology, Tongji Medical C
ollege, Huazhong University of Science and Technology, Wuhan 430030, Ch
ina; 2.The Faculty of Pharmacy, Hubei College of Traditional Chinese Me
dicine, Wuhan 430061,China)
ABSTRACT Objective: To determine the content of gallic acid in Zhixueti
ng liquids. Methods: Zhixueting liquids were dissolved by distilled wat
er, and then extracted into the sample with butanal etc. The samples we
re determinated by TLC scanning (λS=280nm,λR=350nm). Result: The aver
age recovery rate was 96.36% and RSD=2.39%. The contents of gallic acid
 in 3 five batches of samples were 0.38,0.42 and 0.47mg/ml. Conclusion:
 The method is simple, convenient and available.
KEY WORDS TLC Scanning; Zhixueting liquids; Determination; Gallic acid
修正：
Determination of Gallic Acid in Chuxueting1 oral Liquids by TLC Scannin
g
ZHOU Qun1, XU La-ying2 (1. School of Pharmacy2, Tongji Medical College,
 Huazhong University of Science and Technology, Wuhan 430030, China; 2.
The Faculty of Pharmacy, Hubei College of Traditional Chinese Medicine,
 Wuhan 430061,China)
Abstract Objective: To determine the content of gallic acid in Chuxueti
ng oral Liquids. Methods: The Chuxueting oral Liquid was dissolved in d
istilled water, and then extracted （into the sample删去） with water-s
aturaled n-butanol3 etc. for the preparation of samples. The samples we
re subjected to gallic acid determination by TLC scanning (λS=280nm,λ
R=350nm). Results: The average rate of recovery was 96.36%,（and删去） 
RSD=2.39%. The contents of gallic acid in 3 （five删去） batches of sam
ples were 0.38,0.42 and 0.47mg/ml respectively. Conclusion: The method 
is simple, convenient and feasible.
KEY WORDS TLC Scanning; Chuxueting oral Liquids; Determination; Gallic 
acid
点评：
1、zhixueting 应为“止血停”而非“出血停”，自相矛盾。“出血停”也可译为
hemorrhage-stopping，以方便国外读者理解。
2、school可作“（大学里的）院”解，原意是“药学院”，而非“药理教研室”
，故改之。
3、斜体n表示“正”。

2、原文：
Content Determination of Emodin in Qingre Mingmu Capsules
LUO Ming-zhu1, ZHANG Hong2 (1.Hubei Provice Institute of Drug Control, 
Wuhan 430030, China; 2.The 75310 Medical Team of the Army)
ABSTRACT Objectives: To determination content of Emodin in Qingre Mingm
u Capsules. Methods: Tlcs was used, silica gel Tlc plate, developing so
lvent was Benzene-Ethyl fermate-formic acid-Methanol-water(3:1:0.05:0.1
:0.5) of which the upper solutionλS=435nm,λR=530nm. Result: The linea
r relationship of sample application which ranged between 0.168-3.09μg
 was good. The regression equation was below: Y=105417.7X-1115.6, r=0.9
995; arerage recovery was 100.53%, RSD=3.38%. Conclusion: This method i
s simple, accurate and convenient.
KEY WORDS TLcs; Qingre ming mu Ccapsules; Emodin
修正：
Determination of Emodin Content in Qingremingmu1 Capsules
LUO Ming-zhu1, ZHANG Hong2 (1.Hubei Provicial Institute of Drug Control
, Wuhan 430030, China; 2.The 75310 Medical Team of the Army)
ABSTRACT Objective: To set up a method for the determination （content删
去） of Emodin content in Qingre Mingmu Capsules. Methods: In the TLC a
ssay, a 0.5% canboxymethyl cellulose sodium (was used删去) silica gel G
 plate and a developing solvent with a mixture of benzene—ethyl format
e—formic acid—methanol—water(3:1:0.05:0.1:0.5) as the upper solution
 were used.λS=435nm,λR=530nm. Results: A good linear relationship was
 found when the sample amount (which删去) ranged between 0.168-3.09μg 
（was good删去）. The regression equation was as follows: Y=105417.7X-1
115.6, r=0.9995.The average rate of recovery was 100.53%, RSD=3.38%. Co
nclusion: The method is simple, convenient and accurate.
KEY WORDS TLC; Qingre Mingmu Ccapsules; Emodin
点评：
1、中成药名用斜体书写，也可译作removing pathogenic heat to improve acui
ty of vision。

3、原文：
Research on The Acute Toxicity of Huning Capsule
XIN Zhi-wei, ZANG Zhi-he, MAI Xiao-xia, FENG Jun, YANG Wan-qing, LIAO H
ong-li (Teaching and Research Section of Pharmacy, The Third Medical Un
iversity, Chengdu College of PLA 610081, China)
ABSTRACT Objective: To observe and test the acute toxicity of Huning Ca
psule on Kunming mice after an i.g. Methods: Count the death cases of m
ice in 7 days after the i.g. and work out the LD50 of Huning Capsule. R
esults: The LD50 of Huning Capsule on mice is 3981mg/kg.
KEY WORDS Huning Capsule; Acute Toxicity; LD50
修正：
An Experimental Study of the Acute Toxicity of Huning Capsules1
XIN Zhi-wei, ZANG Zhi-he, MAI Xiao-xia, FENG Jun, YANG Wan-qing, LIAO H
ong-li (Teaching and Research Section of Pharmacy, Chengdu Military Med
ical College, The Third Military Medical University, Chengdu 610081, Ch
ina)
ABSTRACT Objective: To observe and determine the acute toxicity of Huni
ng capsules (on Kunming mice删去) after a single intragastric administr
ation in the mouse. Methods: 50 Kunming mice were randomly divided into
 5 equal groups, with 10 animals in each group. A single dose of 7500, 
5630, 4200, 3150 and 2360mg/kg-1 of the content of the capsules were ad
ministened through a gastric tube to each of the mice of the 5 groups, 
respectively. The numbers of the deaths of the mice within 7 days were 
noted down and the mediar lether dose (LD50) of Huning Capsules was cal
culated. (Count the death cases of mice in 7 days after the i.g. and wo
rk out the LD50 of Huning Capsule. 删去) Results: The LD50 of Huning Ca
psule in mice was 3981mg/kg. Conclusion: Huning Capsules have only a mi
nor acute toxicity. It is therefore safe to use the drug clinically. Fu
rther study of its toxicity in long-term application is required.
KEY WORDS Huning Capsules; Toxicity, acute; LD50
点评：
1、“呼宁胶囊”也可译作antitussive and antiasthmatic capsules.

 
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